Editorial Style Guide

The Purpose of this Guide

The NJCU Style Guide is designed to ensure consistency across all channels and on behalf of all University communications. The guide is updated periodically to reflect critical updates.

Contact Ira Thor (ithor@njcu.edu), Associate Vice President for University Communications/University Spokesperson, with questions or suggestions to enhance this guide.


AP Style

好色先生 (NJCU) uses AP Style with some exceptions: see the Purdue Associate Press Style based on .

Merriam-Webster

For questions of spelling, use the . Use the first spelling presented, and note that word presentations in the dictionary supersede the stylebook.

Capitalization, Titles, Academic Degrees, etc.

Capitalize a person鈥檚 title only when it鈥檚 used directly before a name. This rule includes titles pertaining to government positions (like president, senator, mayor, ambassador, chief justice), religious positions (like pope, cardinal, rabbi), and other organizational positions (like chair, treasurer, general manager).

  • Sue Henderson is the former president of NJCU.
  • NJCU President Andr茅s Acebo
  • She was appointed president of NJCU by the Board of Trustees.
  • The president returned to the Gothic Lounge to greet students.
  • Pope Benedict XVI succeeded Pope John Paul II.
  • The school was treated to a visit by former President Barack Obama.
  • John Smith was named superintendent of the Chicago school district.
  • Superintendent John Smith began his career in the mailroom at the school.
  • Always use title case.
  • Capitalize the first and last words, regardless of the length of the word or the part of speech.
  • Capitalize all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, and pronouns, regardless of the length of the word.
  • Capitalize prepositions of four or more letters (like over, from, and with).
  • Capitalize conjunctions of four or more letters (like unless and than), as well as if and how and why.
  • Italicize titles of books, magazines, newspapers and television programs and magazine and newspaper articles.

Do not capitalize:

  • articles (a, an, and the)
  • prepositions of three or fewer letters (such as of, in, and for)
  • most conjunctions of three or fewer letters (like as, and, or, and but)
  • The 鈥渢o鈥 in the infinitive form (e.g. to blog)

Examples:

  • 鈥淒on鈥檛 Fence Me In鈥
  • 鈥淲alk With Me in Moonlight鈥
  • 鈥淭urn Off the Lights, I鈥檓 Home鈥 (鈥淥ff鈥 is an adverb here, part of the phrasal verb 鈥渢urn off.鈥)
  • 鈥淪he Took the Deal off the Table鈥 (Here, 鈥渙ff鈥 is a preposition.)
  • 鈥淲hat If I Do, What If She Won鈥檛鈥
  • 鈥淭he Least She Could Do Is Cry鈥
  • "ESPN SportsCenter"

If the first word in a title is a proper noun that begins with a lowercase letter (like iPhone), try to reorder the title so that you can capitalize the name as the company or person usually does. if such a noun falls elsewhere in the title, use the company鈥檚 capitalization style (iPhone). for instance, 鈥渟ales of iPod soar.鈥

For specific instructions on how to handle numbers in titles, see section on Numbers. Hyphenated Compounds in Titles.

If a hyphenated compound appears in title-style capitalization, capitalize the first word, and capitalize all subsequent words in the compound except for articles (a, an, and the), prepositions of three or fewer letters (like to and of), and coordinating conjunctions (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, and so). Ask yourself: If this word weren鈥檛 in a hyphenated compound, would I capitalize it? If the answer is yes, capitalize it as part of the hyphenated compound, too.

Examples:

  • The Big Spender鈥檚 Budget How-To (capitalize any word, even 鈥渢o,鈥 at the beginning or end of a title.)
  • Author of How-to Book on Bee-Keeping Prone to Anaphylaxis
  • Governor Slams E-Book 好色先生 Her Re-Election Campaign
  • Consumers Prefer Eco-Friendly and Cheap Products
  • Two-Thirds Vote Needed to Fund Research Into Blue-Green Algae Biofuel
  • Profits Double on Word-of-Mouth Sales
  • Audiences Love His Man-好色先生-Town Sophistication
  • Open Your Own eBay-Based Boutique
  • Verbs (even short ones like is, be, and do) should always be capitalized. No matter how short, pronouns such as he, she, it, me, and you) should be capitalized. Capitalize both parts of phrasal verbs, multi-word verbs that include adverbs such as up and out (for example, tune in and hold on). Phrasal verbs don鈥檛 include the infinitive to form of a verb (to be, to run)鈥攕o lowercase the word to in such a verb.

Follow an organization鈥檚 conventions as to how it capitalizes and punctuates its names. many organizations (for example, FedEx) incorporate intercaps, or capital letters in the middle of the name. other organizations, such as Yahoo!, incorporate punctuation characters in their names. Some examples include:

  • iPod
  • iPad
  • IHOP
  • PayPal
  • Visa
  • MasterCard
  • Tumblr
  • YouTube

In some cases, you may not be able to replicate a graphic symbol used in a name. WALL路E, for instance, is difficult to reproduce and is generally spelled with a hyphen. When in doubt, look at some of the organization鈥檚 press releases or at its copyright page if it has one.

For company, product, and website names that use all-lowercase letters, use an initial capital letter as you would for most other proper nouns. Otherwise, the names are hard to distinguish in text. for company names that include a capital letter somewhere (like eBay or iPod), follow the company鈥檚 capitalization in most situations鈥攅ven an internal capital letter will alert the reader that the word or phrase is a proper noun.

When referring to your own or to another company, use the third-person singular pronouns it and its. In the United States, a company is treated as a collective noun and requires a singular verb and a singular pronoun.

  • The company anticipates an increase in its third-quarter spending. (Singular verb, singular possessive 鈥渋ts鈥)


When writing, use bachelor's degree or bachelor's rather than B.A. or B.S.; master's degree or master's rather than M.A. or M.S.; doctoral degree or doctorate rather than Ph.D. or Ed.D.: He has a bachelor's degree in Finance, a master's in translation, and a doctorate in comparative literature. 

Graduate students who haven't yet graduated will be referred to as: an MBA student. Once they graduate, their graduation year will appear with a comma before the advanced degree, as in: John Smith, MBA '17

B.A. or B.S.; Ph.D. or Ed.D. and J.D. (all with periods); degrees with more than two letters do not take the periods such as MBA, MSN, BSN, MFA, DNP, etc.; master's degree and bachelor鈥檚 degree (with apostrophes), but there is no possessive in Bachelor of Arts or Master of Science.

Use an apostrophe in bachelor's degree, a master's, etc., but there is no possessive in Bachelor of Arts or Master of Science.

Use abbreviations such as B.A., M.A., LL.D., and Ph.D. only when the need to identify many individuals by degree on first reference would make the preferred form cumbersome.

When an academic abbreviation is used after a full name, commas should set it off. For example,

Example: Charles Smith, Ph.D., will present tonight鈥檚 lecture.

  • Wrong: Dr. Smith, Ph.D., will present tonight鈥檚 lecture.
  • Correct: Dr. Smith will present tonight鈥檚 lecture.
  • Correct: Charles Smith, Ph.D., will present tonight鈥檚 lecture.

Majors/Minors:
A major is capitalized when used with its formal degree type. For example:

NJCU's Bachelor of Science in Criminal Justice program is amazing.
NJCU's B.S. in Criminal Justice program is amazing.
NJCU's criminal justice program is amazing.
NJCU's bachelor's in criminal justice program is amazing.
John Hernandez is an accounting major.
John Hernandez wants to graduate with a Bachelor of Science in Mathematics.

Academic Titles
Capitalize and spell out formal titles such as chancellor, chairman, etc., when they precede a name. Lowercase elsewhere.

Bachelor Degree or Bachelor鈥檚 Degree?

AP Style states that you should use an apostrophe in bachelor鈥檚 degree and master鈥檚 degree. For example:

  • Correct: I have two bachelor鈥檚 degrees and one master鈥檚 degree.
  • Wrong: I have two bachelors degrees and one masters degree.
  • Wrong: I have two bachelor degrees and one master degree.
  • Correct: I have a Bachelor of Arts in Linguistics.
  • Wrong: I have a Bachelor鈥檚 of Arts in Linguistics.

An associate degree, however, does not use an apostrophe. For example,

Punctuation

For plural nouns that don鈥檛 already end in s, add an apostrophe and an s (鈥檚) to the end of the word. For nouns (singular or plural) that already end in s, just add an apostrophe.
Here are some examples:

  • Jesus鈥 words
  • Arkansas鈥 legislature
  • The witness鈥 testimony
  • Many businesses鈥 services 

In a sentence, capitalize the first word after the colon if what follows the colon could function alone as a complete sentence. Use a single space following the colon. Place colons outside quotation marks when used together. Here are some examples:

  • This is it: the chance we鈥檝e been waiting for!
  • This is it: We鈥檒l never have to work again!
  • I feel sad when I hear the ending to 鈥淭he Road Not Taken鈥: 鈥淎nd that has made all the difference.鈥   

In a series consisting of three or more elements, separate the elements with commas. When a conjunction (like, and, or or) joins the last two elements in a series, include a comma before the conjunction. Here are some examples:

  • He went to Smith, Jones, and Brown for financial advice.

When using an ampersand in place of and in a series (acceptable only in company names and when space is severely limited, as in a headline), do not insert a comma before it. The combination of comma and ampersand creates visual clutter.

  • He went to Smith, Jones & Brown for financial advice.

A hyphen is used to mean to, up to and including, or through in a range of numbers, dates, game scores, pages, and so on. It is also used to construct a compound adjective that includes a proper noun of more than one word. (New York, Queen Elizabeth, Lake Baikal, and World War II are all multiword proper nouns.) If you are unsure whether a word combination should be two words, two hyphenated words, or one compound word, check the online Merriam-Webster dictionary.

  • Abraham Lincoln (1809-1865) was president during the American Civil War (1861-1865).
  • Jim was interested in the pre-Civil War era. (en dash connecting two-word proper noun 鈥淐ivil War鈥 with pre x 鈥減re-鈥)
  • Sam was a student-athlete on the basketball team.

Use an em dash to set apart entire phrases from the main body of a sentence, and separate the dashes from the words that precede and follow it with a space. When a date range has no ending date, use an em dash instead.

  • The last place she expected to find him 鈥 if she ever found him at all 鈥 was in the library.
  • Mick Jagger (1943鈥), Brian Jones (1942鈥1969), and Keith Richards (1943鈥) were among the band鈥檚 original members. 

Numbers

Use numerals for cardinal and ordinal numbers in headlines, email subject lines, and HTML page titles.

  • In Pamplona, 8 injured in 鈥淩unning of the Bulls鈥 (Headline)
  • Subject: Presentation File 1 of 2 attached (Email subject line)
  • 5th Grader Wins 1st Place in Spelling Bee (Headline)

Spell out cardinal numbers (one, two, and so on) and ordinal numbers (first, second, and so on) below 10, but use numerals for numbers 10 and above.

When expressing percentages, always use numerals and the percentage sign. Do not spell out percentages.

Always use a.m. and p.m. for indicating time. Include periods in each term (a.m. and p.m.) unless a default is in place (e.g., the NJCU.edu website uses AM and PM as the default within the calendar functionality). Use Eastern Standard Time (EST) when observing standard time (winter), and eastern daylight time (EDT) when observing daylight saving time (summer). Additionally, using noon and midnight or 12 p.m. and 12 a.m. are permissible, but not together (i.e. noon and midnight, not 12 noon or 12 midnight). Midnight is part of the day that is ending; 12 a.m. is part of the day that is beginning.

  • We will schedule the meeting on Monday, January 20 at 9:35 a.m. EST.
  • The webinar will be held on Friday, August 27 at 4 p.m. EDT.
  • Kickoff for the New York Giants football game is scheduled for 12 p.m.
  • Today's class will be held from 10-11 a.m.
  • The shuttle will operate from 6 a.m. to 9 p.m.

Telephone numbers should be represented with hyphens as opposed to parentheses or periods:

Correct:
201-200-2472
44-020-7123-1234

Use numerals when referring to numbers that a person must type, such as for coordinates in tables and worksheets, and for parts of a document, such as page numbers or line references.

  • Type 5 and press Enter.
  • Select row 3, column 5 of the worksheet.
  • Refer to line 9 of the transcript.

If a passage contains two or more numbers that refer to the same category of information and one is 10 or higher, use numerals for all numbers referring to that category. When numbers are treated consistently, readers can recognize the relationship between them more easily.

  • The delegation included 3 women and 11 men.
  • He was the 9th person chosen for the 10-person team.
  • The most popular vote-getters included three women and nine men.
  • Only 3 women and 11 men attended the four-day event.

Express large and very large numbers in numerals followed by million, billion, and so forth. If expressing a number greater than 999 in numerals, use a comma.

  • 5 billion people
  • 1,200 years ago

When stating million or billion with a numeral, don鈥檛 hyphenate, even before a noun. Use a hyphen between the numeral and million or billion if the expression is part of a compound adjective that takes a hyphen elsewhere.

  • A $6 million lawsuit
  • The 400-million-served mark

If space is tight (for example, in headlines, tables, diagrams, or text messages), some abbreviations are acceptable.

  • mil (million). see 鈥渕il.鈥
  • bil (billion). see 鈥渂il.鈥
  • K (thousand) - Among other things, K can stand for thousand, kilobytes, kilobits, and kilograms. Use K only if its meaning is clear from the context.

Avoid starting a sentence with a numeral. If you can鈥檛 avoid it, spell out the number.

  • 450 students participated in last night鈥檚 lecture. (avoid)
  • Four hundred and fifty students participated in last night鈥檚 lecture.
  • Last night, 450 students participated in the lecture.

A year may be written in numerals at the beginning of a sentence. It鈥檚 okay to start a headline with a numeral if space is tight or if the numeral makes the headline more eye-catching or easier to scan or understand.

  • 1967 was the summer of love in San Francisco.
  • 8 Diet Tips
  • Two 5-Year-old boys found; one still missing

Avoid expressing ordinals with superscript letters (such as 10th, 11th, and so on). Ordinals with superscript formatted in a word processor may not display correctly in some places, such as email, and the use in writing of these suffixes is becoming increasingly archaic. Do not use 鈥渢h鈥 endings or their equivalent when stating dates (i.e., do not write Join us on June 10th).

It鈥檚 important to properly cite sources in all NJCU publications, whether online, printed, or projected. If you鈥檝e got a case not covered here, find a way to attribute your source that seems appropriate to the medium. Choosing not to cite your source is an unacceptable alternative.

Link Attribution

When including links in external content such as blog posts and ebooks, use anchor text when possible. Linking to other articles and websites is a best practice.

  • NJCU provides excellence in education.
  • Visit NJCU.edu for more information. (When including links in presentations, you can use the domain as anchor text.)

Image Attribution

When using photos or images from Flickr or another online source under the creative commons license, they must be attributed. When attributing an image, please use the following format and link back to the original source image using the photographer鈥檚 name as anchor text.

  • Image Credit: linked source

Commonly Troublesome Words

  • alt text
    Short for alternative text, which is text entered into the HTML alt attribute associated with an image on a web page.
  • app
    Short term for application. Plural: apps. Do not use if there鈥檚 any room for confusion.
  • A/B test
    also called split testing; at Hubspot, we use a/b testing and write it with the slash.
  • B2B
    Abbreviation for business-to-business.
  • Best-seller (n.), best-selling (adj.)Note hyphen
  • beta
    Capitalize beta if it is part of an official product name. Otherwise, lowercase it.
    Sign up for the new Yahoo! Messenger beta. try the beta version of Yahoo! messenger.
  • Blog (n., adj., v.)
    Preferred to weblog (lowercase)
  • business-to-business
    hyphenated (abbreviation: B2B)
  • call-to-action, calls-to-action, CTA, CTAs
    Always hyphenate when used as a noun (as in 鈥渃all-to-action button鈥 or 鈥渃all-to action manager鈥). Whenever possible, try to use CTA or CTAs instead of hyphenated version (it鈥檚 a mouthful).
  • checkin (n.) checked-in (adj.), check in (v)
    one word when used as a noun or an adjective. Two words when used as a verb. (Refers to social networks)
  • cell phone (n., adj.)
    Two words, no hyphen
    He left the message on my cell phone. Type in your cell phone number.
  • clickthrough (n., adj.), click through (v.)
    one word when used as a noun or an adjective. Two words when used as a verb.
    The company鈥檚 online ads consistently earn a high clickthrough rate. Click through to the last page to see your score.
  • crowdsource, crowdsourcing
    One word.
  • do鈥檚 and don鈥檛s
    Note the apostrophes. This is actually proper AP style, but try to avoid using this construction if at all possible as the perception is that it looks incorrect.
  • e.g.
    Abbreviation meaning for example. Note periods. Don鈥檛 include a space after the first period. Ok to use when space is a consideration; otherwise, use for example, for instance or such as. if used, always include a comma after the last period. see also 鈥渋.e.鈥 and 鈥渆x.鈥漚s each of these has different meanings and are not interchangeable.
    Enter a search term (e.g., admissions, biology, athletics) into the box.
  • ebook
    all lowercase (in titles/headlines and at the beginning of sentences, capitalize the 鈥渆鈥 but not the 鈥渂鈥).
  • ecommerce
  • email (n., adj., v.)One word, no hyphen. Plural: email messages and emails are both acceptable.
  • eSports (n.)
    one word, no hyphen. If used as the name of an organization, team or arena, the 鈥榚鈥 is lowercase and 鈥楽鈥 is capitalized except at the start of a sentence; in that circumstance, ESports is permissible. In "esports" is acceptable .
  • Facebook
  • Facebook Page
    Capitalize (Exception: lowercase when saying 鈥減ages on Facebook鈥).
  • Facebook Profile
    Capitalize (Exception: lowercase when saying 鈥減rofiles on Facebook鈥).
  • Facebook group
    Capitalize (Exception: lowercase when saying 鈥済roups on Facebook鈥).
  • geolocation
    One word. the geographic location of an internet- connected computer, or the process of determining that location.
  • geotagging (n.) geotag (v.)
    one word. the verb means to add geographic data (such as longitude and latitude coordinates) to a photo or other media file.
  • Google
    according to google guidelines, it is not okay to use this trademark as a verb. Use search, search for, or search on instead.
  • Hashtag #
  • Homepage
  • how-to (n., adj.)
    Note hyphen when used as a noun or an adjective. Plural noun: how-tos.
    Your How-to Guide to Home Buying (headline set in title case)
    Home-Buying How-to (another headline in title case)
  • i.e.
    abbreviation meaning that is. Note periods. Do not include a space after the first period. Okay to use when space is a consideration; otherwise use that is, in other words, or equivalent. If used, include a comma after the last period. (Note that 鈥渋.e.鈥漝oes not have the same meaning as 鈥渆.g.鈥)
  • internet
    lowercase.
  • IT
    Abbreviation for Information Technology. Abbreviation is always acceptable.
  • keyword, key word (n.)
    one word when referring to terms that are used on a web page to optimize it for search engines. use two words in other cases 鈥 for example, when key is a synonym for primary or most important.
    An SEO specialist can help you determine the best keywords to use on your web page.
    She heard little else that he said; the key word in the sentence was 鈥渓ove.鈥
  • LinkedIn
    鈥淟鈥 and 鈥淚鈥 are capitalized.
  • Login) n., adj.); log in, log in to (v.)
    One word when used as a noun or an adjective. Two words when used as a verb, which may be followed by the preposition to. Note that sign in is preferred as it sounds less technical.
    Anyone can create a mashup with the right technology.
    Use our tool to mash up RSS feeds into a single view.
  • metadata (n.)
    one word
  • news feed (n.)
  • news release
    Use instead of 鈥減ress release鈥 whenever possible
  • nonprofit
    one word
  • Okay (n., v., adv.)
    To be used interchangeably with OK. Do not use variations such as Ok and o.k., which are incorrect.
  • Opt-in (n. adj.), opt in (v.)
    Hyphenated as a noun or an adjective. Two words as a verb.
    The opt-in has been disabled.
    To receive electronic statements, you must opt in.
  • Page view
    Two words. The viewing of a web page by one visitor.
    Advertisers consider how many page views a site receives when deciding where and how to advertise.
  • Real-time (adj.), real time (n.)
    Hyphenated when used as an adjective; not hyphenated when used as a noun
  • Retweet
  • Screen name
  • Screenshot
  • Setup (n., adj.), set up (v.)
    One word when used as a noun or as an adjective. Two words when used as a verb.
    Set up your GothicNet account.
    Check out your GothicNet homepage.
    Your setup fee has been waived.
  • sign-in (n., adj.); sign in, sign in to (v.)
    as a noun or an adjective, it鈥檚 hyphenated. as a verb, it鈥檚 two words, which may be followed by the preposition to.
    All visitors must sign in on the sign-in page.
    Visitors can sign in to Yahoo! Mail automatically.
    Choose your preferences for sign-in and security.
  • sign-out (n., adj.); sign out, sign out of (v.) as a noun or an adjective, it鈥檚 hyphenated. As a verb, it鈥檚 two words, which may be followed by the preposition of.
  • sign-up (n., adj.), sign up (v.)
    Hyphenate when used as a noun or an adjective. Two words when used as a verb.
    Sign up for the service.
    Fill in the sign-up form.
    Sign-up is free.
  • since
    not a synonym for 鈥渂ecause.鈥 can be confused with the sense of 鈥渙ver the time that has passed鈥 rather than 鈥渁s a result of.鈥 use 鈥渂ecause鈥 instead of since when possible. This also applies to 鈥渄ue to鈥 and 鈥渙wing to鈥 and 鈥渄ue to the fact that鈥 and other, needlessly wordy ways of saying 鈥渂ecause.鈥
  • site map
  • slideshow (n., adj.)
  • smartphone
  • swag
    Free goods. not schwag or shwag.
  • text (n., v.)
    Short form of text message. Plural: texts. Other forms: texted, texting.
    Did you get my text?
    Don鈥檛 text while driving
    She was texting during the lecture.
  • Text message (n.)Two words when used as a noun. Note hyphen when used as an adjective or a verb.
    She had a heated text-message argument with her boyfriend. Did you get my text message?
    I鈥檒l text-message you with the details.
  • touchscreen (n., adj.)
  • toward (not towards)
  • tweet
  • Twitter
  • URL
    All capitals. Stands for Uniform Resource Locator. Abbreviation is always acceptable. Plural URLs
  • U.S. (n., adj.)Abbreviation for United States. Note period, no space. US or U. S. The single exception is specifying currency in prices; in this case, do not include the periods.
  • USA
    Abbreviation for United States of America. Abbreviation is always acceptable.
  • Username
    Lowercase, one word.
  • video camera
  • videoconference
  • voicemail
    one word, lowercase. not voice mail.
  • web (n., adj.)Lowercase.
  • Webcam
  • Webcast
  • Webinar
  • web page
  • website
  • whitepaper
  • wiki
    Lowercase. Plural: wikis.
  • word-of-mouth (n., adj.)
    Note hyphens when used as a noun or adjective.